Cartridgeboy's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Operation O.W.]

I feel like if the lines weren't just straight black it'd give the picture a whole lot more... idk it'd be pretty.

[Sora]

it's interesting ^_^ there are parts i like and parts i don't. The neck is too thin.

[May]

lol ^_^ it's that time of year again.

[SkullWarrior]

i can see that a lot of time and effort went into this. but to put this bluntly you're lacking in fundamentals. the character is stiff. you should look up gesture drawing. Your line art is super boring which can easily be fixed with a change in line weight. look at my stuff for example. (im not the best tho) dont be afraid of other colors. the shading. pick a light source, remember that objects cast shadows. there should be hard shadows too. the airbrush is not always the right option for highlights, and lastly there should be more contrast between your base color and shadows. (that means darker shadows). Good luck with all your other art ^_^

[Blacksmith]

well this is the cutest thing i've seen all day

[playing piano]

omg this made me so happy ^_^

[Astronat]

lol ^_^ it looks like something in a kids book

[true purpose]

I need to learn how to do this ^_^ it looks amazing. You should try to give the eyes a little more depth if that makes since -._.'

[Sexy Elf]

I see you have the basics of lighting down but you should really learn how to draw line art better and try to make your sketch look more natural befor inking it in. This is just super stiff. You should look up gesture drawings and practice that to help your art "flow" more. You also shouldn't be afraid of using more colors when you shade. You should check out my art. Altho it might not be anatomically correct, it's still aesthetically appealing. ^_^ good luck with all your work

Rennis5 responds:

You make some great points and your artwork is pretty good.
I will take your advice and put it to good use in the future, thank you :D