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Six fingers, lop sided boobs, no but or contorts in her legs, eyes that aren't attached to head, and u am not supposed to see her belly button. There's a lot to work on.

Blisschild1 responds:

lmao

If you spent more time working on mannequinization I think this would have turned out a lot better ^_^

Blisschild1 responds:

you have become my favorite person here lol... never have i met anyone so critical

All around good ^_^ her neck is a little miss placed so the head is too far to our left (her right) Thats about it. Also her hands arnt very "girly" but i guess it's just cuz those are thick gloves or something.

Blisschild1 responds:

gasp u gave me 4 stars? what happened to the overly negative critical person i fell in love with?

Things u should look up. Line weight, gesture drawings, Manikinization, Anatomy, Loomis method of drawing, And color theory. Seriously these things will make u an amazing artist.

Lubos responds:

anathomy is aright ;) this is done in flash (with line tool) not in photoshop because my graffic tablet is little bugy . Manikinization WTF u mean ?! color ok that i know that is my weak point.And i spending lots of time reading tutorials a trying lots of method of drawing (as argument i have more than 300 pages of skeches from 4-5 months i belive) go on my profile than go on my DA page that is my main page for drawing here im for animation. anyway thx for advice but it is nothing new for me , and drawing babes is not everything i don't want go that way u do here....

Lol Yes it is ^_^ about your art. I see u have a style your really happy with. I like it a lot. But your work on paper is so much nicer than your digital art. You should look into learning your art program better. This picture! Fist the lines are all one width which is not easy on the eyes. Look up good line art see how they ink their work. Also shadows give objects shape. So think about where the lights coming from and think about how the shadow would wrap around that object and all that. Anyway i hope to see you improve cuz the style is way cool.

QuiteSplendid responds:

Sorry for the late response.

Thank you, I'm very happy to hear that you like my style. ^^

I'm currently trying to get better with line art, so I'll try my best on my next drawings and hopefully they yield better results.

Thank you very much for taking the time to write this. It helps a lot. :)

Arms arnt shaped like that. the eyes are too far apart (idk if it's just your style but i think it'd look better closer.) Your for shortening is off. You should clean up your line art. Women have color bones and the head seems like it's "floating" Meaning it doesn't look like it attaches to the body like that. The shading needs more tones and idk i have a general idea where the lights coming from but not really. You should focus less on the manga style and learn more about how to draw the human form a bit more.

Lol it's looking damn fine ^_^ love the colors and style as always.

Lol holy shit it's cute O.O i love it

It's sooooo stiff. Sorry. If u wanna get better at drawing look up Gesture drawing. U should learn more anatomy as well. anyway about the picture. His left arm is too short and arms arnt shaped like that. he dosnt have nostrils and the under part of his nose should be darker anyway because thats where the light hits it the least. This is the biggest thing. Those eyes are way not even. A lot of manga artists forget that even in this style those things are attached to their heads. Look up the loomis method of drawing and practice it for a day and i guarantee you'll be able to draw a manga head from any angle you can dream of.

The head shape is crazy weird. like it's lop sided. Also the head shouldn't connect to the neck that way. You should look up the loomis method of drawing. The colors are good but uninteresting. The shadows are just darker less saturated versions of their base. Next time don't try to texture the hair with strands. nothing else here looks like that so it's not cohesive to the piece. just a hard shadow will do. And its ok to add blush on the checks but those highlights (or just wight dots) look very out of place. sorry i was so critical on this one.

draneas responds:

You have a couple of interesting points there. I did look up lots of tutorials for heads and anatomy in general. By no means does this picture has any claim of realism though. The shadows are on a multiplied layer painted with a desaturated purple. I'm usually not painting them on with another method. The hair strands DO look out of place, I'm practicing that shading style. And the specular highlights (white dots): right back at ya! ^^ Thanks for the critique.

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